All Comments on 'A One-Night Stand Gone Wrong'

I enjoyed that tale very much. Keep em cumming~

Love the story! Jason sounds like a complete goof in the beginning, but he seemS to win Tia despite shortcomings. Loved the descriptions -- his hairy chest and stomach, his cock. Please write more, and keep them loving each other!

Damn that was great. I'm guessing your a subject of the Queen? I loved the story. Well written thought out. Lovemaking not monkey Fucking. I'd dearly like to see where this relationship goes. Chap 2 soon?

3 stars

DragonRider55

Good balance of uncertainty and confidence between the couple, turning friendship into something deeper. Well done, would love to see their story continue.

Chap.2, her turn on top

Chap.3 They decide to marry, kids come along

Chap.4 He is tempted to stray, but doesn't. Discussion about love, sex, and expanding

boundaries.

Chap.5 They expand their horizons when the nest is empty.

I AGREE WITH ALL OF THE GREAT COMMENTS BELOW. WE WANT MORE. FOLLOW UP THIS STORY WHEN YOU ARE ABLE. BUT, I FEAR SHE MIGHT BE IN OVERLOAD ALREADY. SHE WORKING, HOPEFULLY, ON A FEW GREAT STORIES NOW SO WE SHOULD GIVE HER TIME AND PATIENCE TO WRITE THEM. BUT INSIST ON FOLLOWUPS FOR THE NEAR FUTURE. WE DON'T WANT HER TO BURN OUT FROM OVERLOAD NOW DO WE? SHE DOES HAVE GREAT STORIES TO TELL AND I HOPE SHE CAN CONTINUE TO PROVIDE TELLING THEM HER WAY. JACK

THIS NEEDS A FOLLOW UP!!!

Nice pace, wonderful story.

Thanks

Loved it

This is fun.

Sweet, nice, realistic, cute, sassy girl, adorable guy...perfect romance!

"Love Love Loved it!!!

Sweet, nice, realistic, cute, sassy girl, adorable guy...perfect romance!"

- Thank you so much :-) This was one of those ideas that I simply could not forget - until it got down on paper. Most often that's the easiest: to just give in and start writing :-)

loved it. But I was hoping that Jason had went ahead to lick her clit and pussy after they were interrupted. :-)

Another great story albeit a short one. Wonder how it got on in the competition.

Definite possibilities for it to be developed into a much longer lifetime story of some sort.

Well done. Thanks

Highly enjoyable story! Friends make the best lovers especially for long lasting relationships.

Eine schöne, kurze Geschichte, die wie so häufig Lust auf mehr macht!

Very good but a few too many similarities to some of your other characters. Some of the dialogue was the same too. Also, the image of the protagonist is a little... Idk an air of unrealistic dreaminess to her, as if this was a way she would behave in a fantasy. Hope that makes sense

So glad I discovered your stories!

delicious...

I’m so glad I found your writing. You’re a beautiful writer. I’ve been searching for someone who writes well. I’m now a fan.

I loved the slow inevitable buildup to the ultimate goal. Even as the ending was anticipated the visual picture was the prize.

Added to my favorites for a future thrill.

Thanks

Very sweet story. I like the feeling of two very nice people who finally figure out how to get closer. The simplicity of the writing is relaxing. I think the repetitiveness of the first part of the story was a bit overdone, the "he isn't interested in me, she isn't interested in me", over done as in not developed as much as repeated. Living in California, the trust exhibited by all parties, including the friends and the girl to having her bound hands shown to her acquaintances seems from another world.