All Comments on 'A Couple of Wishes Pt. 01'

I really enjoyed it, the relationship between the characters felt great and the sex was hot

This story was the perfect. You should add more tags to make it easier for more people to find it. I hope you will continue this story.

beautiful but make the paragraphs more airy

a sequel no doubt

Great story. I'd definitely love a sequel.

Hot hot hot! Please more.

I love it! Very creative idea and well executed. Looking forward to what you do next.

Great story. Very well thought out and written. I especially liked how well you managed to convey their emotions and showed how unsure they were and then the fear, anxiety, acceptance and finally their combined excitement.

Thanks for posting it. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

I loved it! Great job and very creative. I'll be reading the sequel soon. Five stars from me!

The way you showed each character and their emotional state is awesome. A lot of times short stories will just focus on the physical and not the state of mind of the characters. You really nailed both.

The second story I'm reading. So I'm back for more. But please note: "glands" is plural for a lot of different organs but it does not mean the head of a penis which is called the "glans" or the glans head - but only by people trying to sound "scientific".

Very creative, imaginative, and original! I enjoyed Chapter 1 and will definitely check out your other works. I also invite you to check out my stories published here on Literotica!

Superb exploration. Well done! Kept me aroused and page turning from start to finish. Can't wait to read more!