All Comments on 'The Vixen'

Loved it. Will deff read another like it

I just love your stuff...

I must admit to bring irked by the beginning - you know, bring human and all - but I loved the conquer from within ending...

Waited so long for Ur next installement but it as worth it. Ss almost always i would again very much like to read a little more of afterstory, but still 5/5 :)

Plz dont make me wait so long for another one :)

Man, I was really afraid he'd actually leave her even after their love story looked strong.

But you never fail to please. Kits are cute indeed!

And a wonderful tale of tail. Bushy pun fully intended. Thoroughly enjoyed.

5*

a story that stimulated more than just the imagination.

thanks

Best one I've read in a while. So fucking good, in every way. Good job.

This is pure gold. The story is so compelling and the characters so well developed and well thought out. Combine that with the awesome sex and you have yourself a 10/10 would read again winner.

best story ive read in ages in literotica. Keep them comming

You have perfected the art of Mamono Musume in English. I never thought English was suitable for Mamomusu stories, but holy shit this is top tier. Can't wait for your next one!

Wonderful story with compelling characters, smooth flow, and a great theme.

So compelling that I put my dick away

I was hoping for a court martial of your character. What he did...

Well, then again, he only joined because he couldn't find a job. Anyway, I had hoped for an end where he left a note underneath her bedroom pillows saying "As much as I love you, I cannot live in servitude. Once this war is over, I'll find you again."

Also, you took surprisingly long to get her to touch him, but the actual jump was pretty quick. All of a sudden, she just fucked his brains out. Looking at Rome, that might not be all that unlikely, but still, it felt... Too abrupt.

Apart from that, I enjoyed this tremendously. 4/5.

Another great story from a fine author :)

I could've gotten off but I enjoyed the story so much

I actually cried when I thought he was leaving

I called the litter of kits

And this is fine authorship

beautiful

7/5

I wasn't sure I could finish the story, but knowing the author, I read on and was rewarded with a great finish

Still trying to work out how a dragon can beat weapons that can hit from over the horizon....

So I'm to see more right cause...yea i want more

I really enjoyed this story. You have a smooth writing style and are imaginative with your story line. Keep em coming please.

Hard to make it past the first page. I have no doubt that an 'alien' bridgehead that normal military forces couldn't resist would be nuked. Bunker busters, thermobaric weapons, etc. It'd happen damn fast after tank resistant dragons showed up.

Might have been a great story after page one, but the setting was terrible.

The feels... another one you have written. For the first few chapters I couldn't help but sympathize with the male. What would I do in a similar situation? Forced into slavery... The same thing he would? I have no idea. But the way he reacts to everything is just capital. In the heat of reading it all, I did not expect the twist. I anticipated it, knew it should have happened, but didn't think it would... and when it did my heart no longer felt heavy.

You sir are a talented author. Slime girls, bird girls, lizard girls, and now a fox. Regardless if this might be a more blunt version of 'fifty shades of monstergirl', it is written SPECTACULARLY. Keep it up. Please :)

From a sci-fi/fantasy point of view, your plot sure has some flaws, but essentially that' s not what matters. It's a romantic, exotic and erotic tale - and how you describe the feelings did touch me.

So, thank you very much for this story!

Sweet story. I didn't buy off on the invasion and the fact humans and invaders could have offspring but the story wasn't really scifi so I rolled with it. It was a romantic erotic love story and you pulled that off quite well. I'll definitely take a look at o your other offerings.

Top marks for a well written tale thank you

Touch fluffy tail

excellent work,keep it up

Is it possible to make sequels of any of your stories involving the characters and/or their children? I like to see if that's possible.

Anonymous-E

So I read this story like a while ago, and I couldn't remember the name. I only remembered that I really liked it. And then I was browsing and I stumbled upon it again and I was like super happy. I really like this story, its cute and heart warming as much as it is hot. I'll check out more of your stuff if its like this :3

This took my heart on a rollercoaster of emotions. Very well done and loved it all the way.

:D

Stumbled upon it. Again. Enjoyed it. Again. :)

How can you not love a hot, horny, orgasmic, foxy chick that leaves her delicious scent all over you? Hehe.

Oh my gosh must be prefer hormones but this is by far the sweetest and sexiest story I've read. Horny and crying here people!! Loved it! And would love to read more

Im not into furry at all! I have to state that! And put that clearly! Anyhow: that was one of the sweetest and most adorable stories I have read on Literotica so far! Absolutely loved it! I keep telling people how detailed fuck-scenes don't make a good story and how they should pay more attention to character through action. You did all that! There was the sensual side to it, that was becoming more immanent along the story and you gave the characters room to evolve and the reader time to get to know the characters and: to like them! So all well done! Keep it up!

Every time I am cursing the idiot when he's trying to run and escape what is a great thing. I love that feeling and you invoke such a great emotion, I really felt and was hopeing for the two. Great story great ending and a great love story.

I still think we could take down dragons with modern weaponry, though. Also, like the commentator earlier, I'm pretty sure we'd have nuked the bejabbers out of any invading force once they proved unbeatable on the ground.

The Vixen and The Dragon's Heart have to be to of my all time favorites.

Really a masterpiece

Even tho Azeri was cruel at the beginning to whats-his-name,the turning point was when Raboso came for their date,and Azeri said she loved men like him,all the while looking at WHN,that meant she was in love with him,not Raboso.

But WHN was so conflicted about Azeri he couldn't decide if she was the enemy or the love of his life,but she knew the only way to prove her love for him,was to let him go,and she did,and WHN had his chance to leave but he realized at the elevator he too was in love with Azeri and went back to her.

So the war was over and so many Humans and Therians wound up becoming parents that they no longer treated each other as slave and master but as spouses and mates.Finally I am glad Azeri and WHN found love and are expecting a litter kits soon.Truly Touching Story.

Hello there,

I opened this story expecting some good material for some release. Instead, I was pleasantly surprised to find a story that I just didn't want to stop reading. This was a beautiful story and I would love to see some other couples and their stories.

Chretner

The author writes such wonderful stories but I find this is my favorite. Very charming indeed. 5 stars

Loved the story and enjoyed the ending, but I was wondering why Azeri would wear nylons on her legs? If her legs were shaved nylons would be very sexy but even with normal hair on a leg, it just mashes the hair down making a very lumpy look. I think the soft hair by itself would be so much sexier. Still it was a great story well worth all five stars. thanks

5

The premise of an alien attack,enslavement,education,acceptance,then love and finally breeding is just weird,but to have Azeri and Whats-his-face end up falling in love and reconciling and pregnant with half human/half fox kits or children is just both strange and beautiful.

It was like 2 Star crossed species were destined to meet and eventually fall in love the way they were meant to.Sure that sounds cheesy but aren't stories like these suppose to be?.I hope the author continues more stories like this,excellent plot.

he don’t miss

HE DON’T MISS

once again the legend writing stories that make me cry instead of want to jack off

good shit

We need a sequel or something similar. I love Azeri!

Very nice story, liked it a lot. :)

Can't get enough of the wonderful story and emotions.

Thanks for my favorite!

And I really enjoyed it. Just what is needed to lift the soul. Well done. Nothing critical to note.

Wonderfully written and engaging. I'm curious about the therian world and hope to read more about it.

Thank you.

Awesome story. Please write more like this.

Crazy, I loved it!

I remember reading this story years ago. It's a great read.

You’re writing is beyond normal.. please continue

I loved this story alot good work

Great writing, would love to read more about these 'worlds'.

Wonderful! Enjoyed this far more than I expected!

Few porn literature... hell, few stories in literature as a whole have made me truly care for the characters, and *you somehow managed to do that, without thing us the main character's name.*

Truly impressive. Amazing writing. All in all, an easy 10/10.

Thank you so much for the wonderful story

Cowards should have nuked the planet. Wiped out everything.

A beautiful well written erotic tale. I loved the happy ending. Well done!

great story!!

One of the most memorable scenes is the rooftop where she tells the MC that she does love him. There is an inconsistency when she says that she never told Raboso that she loved him even though she says she loves Raboso when the character is first introduced.

Oh damn KerberosProtocal is right, I didn't even notice that

There is another inconsistency in the first interaction with Raboso where the MC actually opens the door for the other man. The door chirps which I interpreted as the doorbell. The MC goes and opens the door for Raboso to let him in which completely negates all previous and future attempts to escape since the MC "hurried over to the door and opened it". I could be misinterpreting the noise, and it is possible that Raboso had the code to unlock the door, but then he could've just opened the door when he unlocked it.

Cute story with wholesome, romantic erotica.

Personal critique though, the blossoming romance between the protagonist and Azeri could've been more fleshed out. A few more interactions that slowly become more personal and heartfelt between the two along with maybe adding a backstory for both of them would've made their relationship even more wholesome and meaningful.

Y'all should check out 'Fate also smiles' by Wirewolf in SoFurry. Another similar story involving a blossoming, wholesome romance between a Human and a Vixen.

Lovely story in an interesting setting!

Nothing wholesome about this no matter which way you spin it. Its nothing but enslavement and a vast majority of men would never tolerate this they would simply burn They're disgusting world to the ground before submitting fact.

I had to ponder for some time, wether I like this story. I like it, it's a love story and a very god one.

What strikes me about the comments:

There are stories galore about powerful men falling in love with their female servant, slave or a woman dependent on her master. This story is just the other way round.

And I like the ending: make love not war.

I like love these alien female / human male romances, please keep on writing

Anyone who says this is not wholesome is uncultured. Keep up the good work!

Wow, just wow. This was amazing!

I'm not as articulate as the others. Besides, they already said all the praise that I'm thinking off :) It was a great story. Loved the wholsome and naughty bits alike. However it kinda feels rushed at the end, after she takes the pills. No matter tho, I have an overreactive imagination, I can make one up in my head, and I'm a sucker for happy endings so this one left me with a smile on my face.

Wow. Just wow. This is no doubt in my mind one of my top favorite stories EVER. I don’t have any problems at all, it was so great and enticing in so many ways, amazing!

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Very Kawaii und Romantique!

11/110!!!!!

This is the third time I came to read this story. I've forgotten many fanfiction names, but this one was stuck in my mind and jeez it's worth it! I still feel the same way as when I read it for the first time.

I’ve been burning through all of your stories and absolutely love them. I’m not sure if I have a favorite yet but this one definitely ranks high among them. You’re a very talented writer and I am looking forward to your future work.

Love it. Give us more.

why not just have him ware a leash I mean he was a week cowardly human 'there not interestingly to be the main character just to be obedient,who wants to be a smart

From the human to the vixen they were great characters but I wouldve liked to have seen more of their world.

It's been over three years since I read this story the first time and I'd give it another five stars if possible. So very sexy, makes me want to find a vixen of my own and chase her around the house, lol.

AHHHHH ITS SO GOOD

That was great, You put Emotion to the Characters. Thank you for writing.

Excellent story. It never would have worked without the invasion and taking the people back to their world. The way humans are, if they'd tried to simply integrate from the beginning, and stayed on earth, their would be a never-ending resistance always attacking them, and that's probably the way it is on the earth side of things. It would be nice to see a story from that side of the war.