All Comments on 'Severance Agreement'

Excellent story as usual; Melanie getting exactly what she deserves.

Utter crap - misogyny of this depth is seldom seen even on Loving Wives.

The blackmailers could - possibly - ruin Mel, but they'd have plenty of time in the slammer to consider whether it was worth it (they wouldn't be able to keep any of the money) Jail time for the unauthorized video, copying and possessing the unauthorized video, and the blackmail - tell those two to write when they get work outside the walls - the prison laundry doesn't count

A lawyer and the Police. End of revenge, end of blackmail, end of stupid story. Of course a gun works the same way.

Great story, love girl on girl humiliation and you make the best!

Thanks DC, it is so good to see You back writing again more regularly. Got to say though I found this one a bit too short. The more expansive the better!

First off - No one is THAT stupid. There's simply no way Melanie puts herself in that position. If she did, she'd have an ace in the hole waiting to get the material back from both Jack and Denise. Denise will be surprised how cooperative she'll be after she gets a couple of broken fingers. The fact that you don't think Melanie is capable of doing something like that or hiring someone to do it was laughable. Badly done.