All Comments on 'Mason Ch. 08'

Really great writing, although it's quite sad to read.

it'll get better!

You are a truly gifted author, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh wow I was wondering how long it was going to take for James to release Toni. As we've all been reading it was up to Toni and on her own time schedule. So what the others were saying and thinking was correct. When Mason let her go to love someone else he gave up some power for another to come along and love Toni. I'm just so happy that Toni and James had there time and I to still miss James cause Mason wasn't ready for anything. Now I'm so hoping that Toni heeds what James asked of her and allow Mason into her life and to love her. Can't wait til the next installment. Yeah!!!

This story makes me very sad."Fucking Fates"

Always crying, but I cannot stop reading this story.I just love it. please keep the chapter coming

I am sitting here reading your story, becoming teary eye. You are such a outstanding writer. Now it time for me to go to classes. Thank you .

Yah!!!! Im so happy and I cant wait to read more.. ***** for five stars

Great chapter!!!

I was so touched by James' words to Toni.

I hope that Mason doesn't become a nurse-babe magnet at the hospital or that Kim's starts any drama.

Next chapter - soon - please!!

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I think that you are trying to keep in tears every time I read this story. I have cried so much reading this is amazing I love your stories can't wait for the next update

BABY WANT MOAR!

I sob like a baby every time without fail.

i LOVE your stories this one is my favorite so far i have cried so much so far in the last couple of chapters and i cant wait for more i am so ansy if you could hurry it up a little:)

All I can say is damn, this is good! Patiently waiting for the next chapter of goodness!

with such a clash of reality that it is startling and mind blowing simultaneously. I love the build up and rush that comes from the intense emotions of your characters. Give us more, and soon!!!

This story makes me missed James more and poor Mason needs to get with it.

Great Job!

I don't Toni to be sad anymore. Mason needs to start putting his plan into motion

I was reading along then...SNAP! The. Bond. Is. FINALLY. There. For. Mason. Great story!

You are an awesome writer I cried when Toni watched the last video.

A writer is gifted when they can stir up emotions simply through words. Add me to the list of people crying after reading this chapter. Excellent work!!!

Beautiful and heart wrenching!!! I can't remember the last time that I read something that made me cry!

i hope Toni is able to move on now! Now Mason needs to let Katrina go!

It's unbelievable that with ALL YOUR TALENT that you have been hiding in here. Thank You for sharing your wonderful stories. I'm surprised that you aren't published or are you?

All the emotions I feel are so overwhelming.....you are a GREAT writer!

This story is wonderful, and I have shed more tears than I can remember reading any other story! Except maybe "The Color Purple". You are magnificent and I will always be a fan! Kalamazoo.....YOU ROCK!!!!!

This story is wonderful, and I have shed more tears than I can remember reading any other story! Except maybe "The Color Purple". You are magnificent and I will always be a fan! Kalamazoo.....YOU ROCK!!!!!

I always cry on this chapter!!!!! This is one of my favorite chapters. You are amazing writer. Keep up the great work kal ツ

I almost hate how great this is and how good of a writer you are... I am not a emotional creature but even I'm a little choked up

This is a true year jerker.

I read all the comments before posting this. "Barbra waited until Toni left for work before opening the last disc" then POOF... Toni was there and without any explanation. I can see how you could have made this mistake, but WTF your editors should have caught it. Another tiny thing, this is Literotica, let's have a little sex, even if it's solo! XP