All Comments on 'Jupiter Has Landed Ch. 01'

You have a woman that fights like a "banshee" when she'd kidnapped, but once they start touching her she becomes helpless...

I'm bored with the concept that for an orgasm a woman would do ANYTHING, even give up a formula for curing cancer...riiight...how original.

But I will give you an A+ for the sexual content!

loved it...where's the rest of this story? your stories are the main reason I keep coming back and reading!

I'm so glad you liked the story as this is one of the "strangest" stories I've ever written.

I've also receieved a lot of mixed responses to it, and I don't blame them since the next chapter will explain a lot more of the plot and contain some unexpected events.

Unfortunately the next chapter is still in my head, but it will be done - I promise.

Ada

Sexy! Amazing build-up! I hope to see more, if possible!