by jasliz
some good writing and an excelant story line can't for the rest thank you.
that biatch, you have to continue . mom cant be left out in the cold flat.
I hope that she doesn't lose her son as a lover but gains a new female lover.
Thanks for the read.
This is my favorite new incest series but I do NOT like the way this is going. Bringing in this "girlfriend" has veered the story away from being about incest. It was perfect the way it was before. I know I'm the exception to everyone else but please get rid of this girl and put the boy back with his mother, "makayla" comes across as selfish. And please no "threeways" with the girl and mom. The guy and his mother are totally into each other, the third party just comes across as intrusive. I hope he gets back with his mom, they seemed really happy...
loved the addition of the old gf, but will it work? good job on this plot
The Story was HOTTT then you introduced that blackmailing bitch and you lost me.
It's not that she's not related, but that she's a blackmailing, gold-digging BITCH. If I was David I would not have caved so easily it all became about sex. I'm not saying I would give in but He should have said I will never be able to love you for doing this I'll fuck you to shut your blackmailing bitch ass up but that's the only reason. And Then the Mother trying to turn that whore into a woman her boy deserves is impossible no matter how pretty she is on the outside or how fast she learns to please David she ugly as can be on the inside and that can't change. so I don't see how you can rescue this story.... Which sucks cause I was really enjoying it.
Wanted mom to eat the cream pie out of her son's ex. Good stuff
You lost me hear. All 5 ratings till now. You got a 2. This just did not work.
In most stories, mother and son are not able to be together as husband and wife. I had hoped that this story would be different. The son's initial plan of having Makayla "disappear" was responsible, practical and necessary. Mother leaving the room crying and Makayla sitting their demonistrates what a sorry, selfish bitch she is. She does not care if David wants/loves her or not. She wants him and his trust fund.