Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here"I don't care." I said, beginning to jog away from her.
"Wait!" she called out after me. I knew her enough to know she wasn't gonna give chase. "We can hang out... tour the city... make babies." I gave her a look back, not sure if I heard her right. But at this point, it didn't matter.
I had to get away. So, I ran.
I had to get away, and find a way to maybe, just maybe, find a way out of this mess I had fallen into. Because these experienced women had their sights on me, and if I wasn't careful, I would end up in balls deep in one of my hot relatives.
Yeah, I had to run.
*************************
TheTalkMan's Note: Chapter 2, coming soon. Jesse get's to the bottom of what's going on...will these answers push him away, or draw him closer? One of these women must have what it takes to tame that teenage dick, but who?
- COMMENTS
TEXASMADDOGless than a minute ago"Suspension of disbelief" on reader commented....Yeah, that is what we will call this!! I actually made it through the whole chapter, and give it a (**3**) Star rating.
We ALL really dislike an overly vocal reader who complains about grammar and such. Yet, I am going to be one of those. This chapter DRIPS with poor sentence structure and grammar, defeating the whole idea of focusing on what is going on!!
Anticipation of where the women are going next is minimized by the flow of the writing; I find this chapter captivating, even without the overt stroke-story sex, yet it is taken down by the structure of the writing.
This author does write differently than others, which is to his benefit in some way. And, to his detraction, this style is disappointing!!
Next chapter... maybe it will improve...🤔🥴🥺
Morbidromanticabout 1 month agoI completely agree with midatlstoryman. Do the husbands know how are really their wives? Are they also astraying? I like that the MC is trying to resist.
midatlstoryman3 months agoHe certainly is an innocent. But, it is easy to see why. Dana is just a bitchy slut who didn't give him a thought until he developed muscles. Mom probably fits in that category too, without the bitchiness. Obviously Kendra and Karen are there too. Karen amd Mom have no seconds thoughts about their husbands, so you know this is not their first time around the lustpole. Also noticed that Sandy barely acknowledged his texts Day 1, then never said she missed him. So, guess he may have misjudged her too and she's getting busy in his absence. Looking forward to the next part.
Anonymous9 months agoIn modern age if u dont want to see texts block the number. Other than that like stories
Foxterot7aalmost 2 years agoJesse needs to mature and expand his horizons. I am anxious to find out what the "family curse" is. I have read one other story by this author. He develops the major characters in depth and breath ( physically, emotionally, psychologically and psychiatrically) to an extent that no other author I have read does. His plot is logically constructed. Hopefully the paths that his characters take lead to a truely beautiful, sensitive conclusion. I am a romantic at heart, this author has not disappointed, so far.
