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Click hereIt seemed to go on and on and on. They hurt me with their pinching and they spanked my bottom a little with their hands. They sucked me hard all over my boobs, bum and thighs leaving fierce red marks, fortunately Richard was away otherwise he mat well have seen them.
I was crying and moaning, I was scared, I was frightened and my whole body was shaking. I wanted to get away, but that was impossible. I begged them to stop, but they just laughed and redoubled their efforts.
Now, as well as kissing and doing all the other things to me, they were also doing them to each other. In another situation that also would have been exciting, but in these forced circumstances I hated it. I also hated them, I hated Jane, I hated Benni and Gretter and I hated lesbians. Most of all I though I hated myself for as they all held me down and sucked my tits and shoved their finger in me they made me cum. And that was such a demeaning experience.
Not surprisingly I have not seen Jane since that day.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoBut quite well written, and meant to be I imagine, non-erotic that is.
pooky12349over 6 years agoI really enjoyed this story, not so much for the sex but the way Cat was struggling with the whole concept and what it was exactly that her relationship with Jane was. She denied it until Jane called for her then she was johnny-on-the-spot, but she didn't always enjoy what was happening to her even though it seemed that she wanted to enjoy all of it and that perhaps it could last for some time to come. And that was the problem, which came to a head with the rape scene. I think that was when she fully realized that this was not something she really wanted in the first place. I suspect that it also had something to do with Richard being gone so much of the time.
But then I'm preaching to the choir since this story was written with all this in mind.
Lovely writing, fascinating story! Thank you
touchmatealmost 13 years agoWhile the early part of the journey into the new world is enchanting, the last part is disturbing. cat's submission over time is both believable and understandable. I am glad for Cat that she has ended this relationship with Jane. Your style is breathtaking, Cat. Keep going !!
jessicaj64almost 13 years agoI can't say that I "enjoyed" this story: it was all a little too believable, and the slide into domination by Jane disturbing.
Not that there is anything wrong with domination if that's one's thing, and when it's voluntary; but when it was disturbing to Cat too, and not to her liking, a side of herself that she didn't like: not so much.
You wrote it very well, a little too well! To "enjoy" the story of a woman (or a man, for that matter) being raped, whether it be at the hands of another woman or women, or at the hands of a man or men, is itself disturbing.
As part of the broader plot, and as part of Cat's journey, I get it.
A very well written, disturbing story
