- Loving Wives
- Let Go
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Click hereBev learned some of the local language and one of her favorite phrases meant, "Let's get into the pool naked and fool around." At fifty-six, Beverly could still rock a bikini. When she bothered to wear one.
- COMMENTS
jjfronabout 15 hours agoSpectacular...other than jumping from first person to third person. Improper pronouns from time to time.
Loved reading this story!
Anonymous1 day agoGood story overall. The only question is why would a good looking confident man stay with such a ballbuster wife for so long? And, after she fired him so ruthlessly, why on earth would he recocile with her? He doesnt seem like a submissive or into FLRs or femdom. I think the author really had reconciliation as agoal, but as written the barriers to that were to high.
Dubby491 day agoLike Psychman24 I found the frequent switched from 3rd to 1st person in the same sentence quite jarring.
JohnCKnight6 days agoI really enjoyed this thank you. Recently went through a six month separation. I needed a LW that wasn't a BTB.
Psychman248 days agoGood story, enjoyable to read. As was pointed out the jumps between third person and first person even in the same sentence was jarring. Also why was the wife despairing of having kids at 36, saying that ship had sailed? That's silly, my wife had our first at 36 and that was way back in 1988. Now its even more common, in fact in USA the majority of babies are born to mothers in their 30s, really not a big deal. I have noticed that in most of these stories the main characters marry in early 20s and have babies right away, so I guess its unusual by LW standards, but really nowadays most people don't get married in early 20s and don't have babies that young either
