- Loving Wives
- Let Go
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Click hereBev learned some of the local language and one of her favorite phrases meant, "Let's get into the pool naked and fool around." At fifty-six, Beverly could still rock a bikini. When she bothered to wear one.
- COMMENTS
scurvy41 day agoVery enjoyable story.
It would be nice to have more story about what happens to them over the years with the girls after they move in (i.e. before the epilogue-like fast forward portions near the end).
The author had issues with point of view in the writing. I saw multiple places where (even in the same sentence) it said, for example, both "I" and "she". Possibly written from one point of view and then changed to another and some places were missed. Kind of confusing and it took a bit to understand in a few places. I know it can be hard to keep re-reading your own prose to check for issues - that is where a good editor can help.
Anonymous7 days agoI have to agree with “xtrail65” on this one. It’s
amazing how some otherwise rational people get their hackles up because a piece of
“FICTION” doesn’t fit into their concept of what is possible. Evidently they just can’t fathom the concept of a completely fake, made-up, totally
Not Real story. God, their world must be so boring. I mean, no TV, no movies, no novels,
Nothing that isn’t totally real, possible, with no hint of “couldn’t happen” in their narrow little minds. What a sad existence. … Sorry, off my soapbox now. I love this story, Q, I think this is my third or fourth read. Keep up the great work. Five stars.
mndhanson0178 days agoI find it amusing how some just assume she cheated, instead of actually working her way up and then because they got back together with no cheating involved, he's a cuck smh to the anonymous in the crowd. Probably are likely the ones with nobody.
xtrail659 days agoFFS, some people really need to get a grip and understand the concept of fiction and literary licence. Just enjoy the story for what it is. A beautiful romantic piece of fiction.
