- Erotic Poetry
- His Offering
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She can't help it: she still dreams
often
of how he knelt in front of her--
his eyes, nose and mouth hungry
for her thick, slick, fragrant flavor.
She remembers how he could
barely contain his impatience,
enough only to wrap
his lips around hers
as he knelt
and suckled
and prayed
to his carnal
goddess.
He was naked then, in all ways,
and she received his gift
trembling
with wonder and grace;
wished to receive it
again
and again
every
single
day.
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineerabout 8 years agoI also liked the way you tapered the lines in the 2 stanzas.
It slowed things down, the way lovemaking should be as well the memory of savoring it.
greenmountaineerabout 8 years agoLovely, Mer, but the fly in the ointment for me is "suckle." I know what you mean, but I can't find any other definition for it than the breastfeeding of a baby or young animal, and for me at least it gets in the way of the other beautiful erotic images.
