I'm somewhat of a grammar nazi, and I once took a writing workshop so I think I'm qualified. I'll also let you know if there are inconsistencies in your story.
-I'm interested in BDSM especially Spanking both M-f as well as F-f & F-m but don't do M-m . I don't do Scat which please note .Interracial , Anal , Mind control...
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