I'm somewhat of a grammar nazi, and I once took a writing workshop so I think I'm qualified. I'll also let you know if there are inconsistencies in your story.
Well-published writer on professional topics, editor of two scholarly journals (1976-1992 and 2000-2007). Excellent at spelliing, grammar, and the general "feel" ...
Hi, I am Sam. I am an erotic fiction fan and part-time writer with ample time to edit and review. Good English language skills, an eye for detail and kinky as hell!
The Literotica Editors program exists to help Literotica Authors improve their writing. Do not use this free service to edit work intended for publication outside of Literotica. It is against the rules to use this program to advertise services, products, or other websites. Doing so will result in account suspension.