I'm somewhat of a grammar nazi, and I once took a writing workshop so I think I'm qualified. I'll also let you know if there are inconsistencies in your story.
Well-published writer on professional topics, editor of two scholarly journals (1976-1992 and 2000-2007). Excellent at spelliing, grammar, and the general "feel" ...
I have a good grasp of grammar, and a sense of plot. I like stories that have a beginning, middle and end. If you are writing a bang bang thank you mam sort of...
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